I just wanted to mention that there are a few typos and I apologize about that. Also, I had a bit of a hard time getting the camera to zoom on the words correctly so if it is a little bit far out, I apologize. I had a few issues so bear with me.
Nice job. I like your pictures, character introduction, humor, and the random bits of comedy. There are some items that I would like for you to take a look at.
1. Some of the side comments about characters are not visible due to your path. Fix that. 2. There is some language that wouldn't be appropriate in a classroom. Please change your vulgar language, even though it's a vulgar play. 3. The ACT review is almost impossible to see. It is a TON of information and I couldn't read or take it all in. Condense!!! And make it so someone could present this information to a classroom. 4. Take a look at the overall presentation and see if it flows well. The last image I see is Cody Foster. Is that what you want a global audience to see? 5. Put your works cited on the Prezi itself.
Please fix these items and we can evaluate from there.
I just wanted to mention that there are a few typos and I apologize about that. Also, I had a bit of a hard time getting the camera to zoom on the words correctly so if it is a little bit far out, I apologize. I had a few issues so bear with me.
ReplyDeleteNice job. I like your pictures, character introduction, humor, and the random bits of comedy. There are some items that I would like for you to take a look at.
ReplyDelete1. Some of the side comments about characters are not visible due to your path. Fix that.
2. There is some language that wouldn't be appropriate in a classroom. Please change your vulgar language, even though it's a vulgar play.
3. The ACT review is almost impossible to see. It is a TON of information and I couldn't read or take it all in. Condense!!! And make it so someone could present this information to a classroom.
4. Take a look at the overall presentation and see if it flows well. The last image I see is Cody Foster. Is that what you want a global audience to see?
5. Put your works cited on the Prezi itself.
Please fix these items and we can evaluate from there.