This is a nice presentation. There are many tid-bits of comedy and I can hear your voice in the comments about the characters and the play.
A few things to fix before it's done.
1. Grammatical errors a plenty. Capitol letters, commas, etc. A lot is two words. Go back and find the errors and fix them. 2. There are a few minor issues with your path. I couldn't see all the information, so make sure you include everything in your path. 3. Information about characters before the play begins would be nice, so that we know who these characters are before we set out on this journey. 4. I need at least 3 sources. You may include the actual text as one!
This is a nice presentation. There are many tid-bits of comedy and I can hear your voice in the comments about the characters and the play.
ReplyDeleteA few things to fix before it's done.
1. Grammatical errors a plenty. Capitol letters, commas, etc. A lot is two words. Go back and find the errors and fix them.
2. There are a few minor issues with your path. I couldn't see all the information, so make sure you include everything in your path.
3. Information about characters before the play begins would be nice, so that we know who these characters are before we set out on this journey.
4. I need at least 3 sources. You may include the actual text as one!
Fix these items and we can reevaluate.