So this is entertaining and relatively close to the plot. You pick up the major story line and address many of the issues that we find in the play. I like how you infuse 21st century language into the presentation to make it more accessible for a younger audience.
Here are some items that need to be addressed:
1. The language is too strong for a high school classroom. Please go back and censor your language. If you couldn't hear a teacher saying this to a class, then take it out or change it. 2. You need to develop the secondary plot with Malvolio's character and Sir Toby's, etc. You mention them, but it's not clear what they do in the play. 3. You may want to add music, and some credits/additional information about the play so that we can have some information to go forward with a conversation. 4. We need your sources somewhere.
So this is entertaining and relatively close to the plot. You pick up the major story line and address many of the issues that we find in the play. I like how you infuse 21st century language into the presentation to make it more accessible for a younger audience.
ReplyDeleteHere are some items that need to be addressed:
1. The language is too strong for a high school classroom. Please go back and censor your language. If you couldn't hear a teacher saying this to a class, then take it out or change it.
2. You need to develop the secondary plot with Malvolio's character and Sir Toby's, etc. You mention them, but it's not clear what they do in the play.
3. You may want to add music, and some credits/additional information about the play so that we can have some information to go forward with a conversation.
4. We need your sources somewhere.
Fix please.
Sources?
ReplyDeleteAm I allowed to create an entirely new project on Prezi?
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