So this presentation has potential, but has a lot of internal problems. I think that you have a clear vision, but it's lost in the way you set up your path. There is some modern and mature language that would entice a younger audience to this play, but you need to edit it a bit.
To fix the Prezi:
1. Look at your path. Most of the character's don't have the description in the screen. Go back and figure how to use frames more effectively. 2. Change the language so that it is appropriate for a high school classroom. I understand why you choose to use it, but it needs a bit of cleaning. 3. Think about the bigger picture. I need to have a clear picture about the show and right now, it's not as clear as it can be. 4. Add your sources. 5. Fix the grammatical errors within the text. There are misspellings and capitalization errors.
Once you have done this, we will look at it and go from there. Take your time.
So this presentation has potential, but has a lot of internal problems. I think that you have a clear vision, but it's lost in the way you set up your path. There is some modern and mature language that would entice a younger audience to this play, but you need to edit it a bit.
ReplyDeleteTo fix the Prezi:
1. Look at your path. Most of the character's don't have the description in the screen. Go back and figure how to use frames more effectively.
2. Change the language so that it is appropriate for a high school classroom. I understand why you choose to use it, but it needs a bit of cleaning.
3. Think about the bigger picture. I need to have a clear picture about the show and right now, it's not as clear as it can be.
4. Add your sources.
5. Fix the grammatical errors within the text. There are misspellings and capitalization errors.
Once you have done this, we will look at it and go from there. Take your time.