I gave you comments in person, but nice job here. Like I said, be really critical now and fix the details. Make it great, now that you have a good beginning.
"King John." History Learning Site. Web. 11 Apr. 2010. .
"King John Was Not a Good Man - Magna Carta - Icons of England." Welcome to ICONS - Icons of England. Web. 11 Apr. 2010. .
Norwich, John Julius. Shakespeare's Kings: the Great Plays and the History of England in the Middle Ages, 1337-1485. New York: Simon & Shuster, 2001. Print.
1. There are some minor pathway issues that I would like to work with you on.
2. Some information is still difficult to read from a distance and some of it is confusing, rather than helpful. We need to make some strong decisions on that.
3. I like the sources embedded in the Prezi itself. Can you please embed them?
I gave you comments in person, but nice job here. Like I said, be really critical now and fix the details. Make it great, now that you have a good beginning.
ReplyDeleteQ: Is it as clear as it can be?
Sources:
ReplyDelete"King John." History Learning Site. Web. 11 Apr. 2010.
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"King John Was Not a Good Man - Magna Carta - Icons of England." Welcome to ICONS - Icons of England. Web. 11 Apr. 2010. .
Norwich, John Julius. Shakespeare's Kings: the Great Plays and the History of England in the Middle Ages, 1337-1485. New York: Simon & Shuster, 2001. Print.
A couple things:
ReplyDelete1. There are some minor pathway issues that I would like to work with you on.
2. Some information is still difficult to read from a distance and some of it is confusing, rather than helpful. We need to make some strong decisions on that.
3. I like the sources embedded in the Prezi itself. Can you please embed them?
I will work with you on this.