I really like your images and you have captured the major events in the play. I think you could look at this play a bit more critically and how it relates to our current culture a bit. I also think the the slide show takes a bit too long to transition in between slides. But it's a nice way to introduce the play to a group who is beginning to read it.
Try to see if you can shorten the length between the slides and if you can find more ways to tether it to our what we know about this love triangle and political situation.
Okay, so I don't think you have done any work to this since my last comment. So please do as advised and add your works cited and some music to the slide show as well to finish well.
I really like your images and you have captured the major events in the play. I think you could look at this play a bit more critically and how it relates to our current culture a bit. I also think the the slide show takes a bit too long to transition in between slides. But it's a nice way to introduce the play to a group who is beginning to read it.
ReplyDeleteTry to see if you can shorten the length between the slides and if you can find more ways to tether it to our what we know about this love triangle and political situation.
Okay, so I don't think you have done any work to this since my last comment. So please do as advised and add your works cited and some music to the slide show as well to finish well.
ReplyDeleteI like your redo. Still no sources?
ReplyDeletePlease add sources.