This starts off very well. I like the pictures and how you develop the relationships between the main characters. I also like the flow of the Prezi and it's relatively fun to watch. The last section about the interesting information is good too.
Some items to consider:
1. Their are spelling and grammatical errors within many of the points. 2. Once you get to the breakdown of the play there is way too much information. Please cut this way down and make it easier to read. You may want to redo this whole section or simply find the essential information. 3. You do not have your source material listed in the Prezi, so please do so. 4. Look at this presentation as though you are going to teach this play to a group that has either read the play or is going to perform it. How will this help them to understand the show or the character that they play?
This starts off very well. I like the pictures and how you develop the relationships between the main characters. I also like the flow of the Prezi and it's relatively fun to watch. The last section about the interesting information is good too.
ReplyDeleteSome items to consider:
1. Their are spelling and grammatical errors within many of the points.
2. Once you get to the breakdown of the play there is way too much information. Please cut this way down and make it easier to read. You may want to redo this whole section or simply find the essential information.
3. You do not have your source material listed in the Prezi, so please do so.
4. Look at this presentation as though you are going to teach this play to a group that has either read the play or is going to perform it. How will this help them to understand the show or the character that they play?
Fix and good.
Mr. Weddle,
ReplyDeleteI edited my presentation! just clikc on the site again and the sources are in there and I also cut it down a bit.
Thanks! Megan.
Much Better!!!
ReplyDeleteI really like it. I think that you have fixed all the errors and this is very usable and well done.
Bravo!