So this works from home, but not from school, which is a problem. I think the problem is the music, which as Alex stated, is connected to myspace in some way. Initially, I like you presentation and it's fun to watch and you cover most of what we need for the base of the play.
What I think you need is some additional information about the background of the play and perhaps some links to additional information. You may want to introduce the characters as well.
Works cited somewhere in the presentation.
A way to see it from school. (Drop the song, or add it another way).
So this works from home, but not from school, which is a problem. I think the problem is the music, which as Alex stated, is connected to myspace in some way. Initially, I like you presentation and it's fun to watch and you cover most of what we need for the base of the play.
ReplyDeleteWhat I think you need is some additional information about the background of the play and perhaps some links to additional information. You may want to introduce the characters as well.
Works cited somewhere in the presentation.
A way to see it from school. (Drop the song, or add it another way).
We can look at it from there.