This is a nice beginning to the presentation. I like your intentions and how you set us up with the major characters and begin to give us the plot. I think you can take this further.
To fix: 1. Please give us an overview of the play. We need a bigger picture. 2. We also need more information on the plot. Add more here. 3. Prezi is great because you can add images. Please add some images to help with the story telling. 4. Works cited.
Once you have done this, we will reexamine the presentation and go from there.
This is a nice beginning to the presentation. I like your intentions and how you set us up with the major characters and begin to give us the plot. I think you can take this further.
ReplyDeleteTo fix:
1. Please give us an overview of the play. We need a bigger picture.
2. We also need more information on the plot. Add more here.
3. Prezi is great because you can add images. Please add some images to help with the story telling.
4. Works cited.
Once you have done this, we will reexamine the presentation and go from there.