I think that you have done a nice job, but there are some issues that you need to fix to make this presentation a bit clearer.
1. Please look at your path. There are titles and information that I cannot see because the path doesn't allow me to. 2. There are grammatical errors within the presentation that need to be fixed. 3. The words that you use seemed borrowed. Did you write all of this or was it copied from another source? 4. Please add your works cited.
Once you have made these changes we'll look at it again and go from there.
I think that you have done a nice job, but there are some issues that you need to fix to make this presentation a bit clearer.
ReplyDelete1. Please look at your path. There are titles and information that I cannot see because the path doesn't allow me to.
2. There are grammatical errors within the presentation that need to be fixed.
3. The words that you use seemed borrowed. Did you write all of this or was it copied from another source?
4. Please add your works cited.
Once you have made these changes we'll look at it again and go from there.