This is a nice presentation. I like your visuals in the beginning and the comprehensive take on each of the scenes in the play. You have given us a nice presentation to work with. The paths work well and I think you did a nice job of utilizing Prezi and it's ability to rotate and use a large amount of space.
Some items to look at: 1. The character list is unreadable. Try making several points in the path and hit it at multiple points. 2. The presentation lacks an overview. Can you make one of these? 3. The path shakes? Not sure why, but it could be because of the amount of travel in the path. Not sure what can be done about this. 4. Spelling and punctuation needs to be fixed. 5. Works cited.
This is a nice presentation. I like your visuals in the beginning and the comprehensive take on each of the scenes in the play. You have given us a nice presentation to work with. The paths work well and I think you did a nice job of utilizing Prezi and it's ability to rotate and use a large amount of space.
ReplyDeleteSome items to look at:
1. The character list is unreadable. Try making several points in the path and hit it at multiple points.
2. The presentation lacks an overview. Can you make one of these?
3. The path shakes? Not sure why, but it could be because of the amount of travel in the path. Not sure what can be done about this.
4. Spelling and punctuation needs to be fixed.
5. Works cited.
Please fix these and we can go from there.