I'm sorry about the lack of audio throught most of it, domo for some reason really did not like me to put any ausio on it, i'm not really sure how that first bit stayed on.
I really like your short. It does a nice job of presenting an overview to the play and is also fun and humorous. You have witty dialogue and thought bubbles, while infusing some of the original text.
There are only a couple of things to do to improve your project:
1. I don't think that you need to replay the whole play with the text boxes. The story speaks for itself, so please don't repeat. 2. Take the time to add some more details that don't derail us from the story, but add to it. 3. Sources listed. 4. Grammatical errors fixed. Spelling errors noticed.
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I'm sorry about the lack of audio throught most of it, domo for some reason really did not like me to put any ausio on it, i'm not really sure how that first bit stayed on.
ReplyDeleteI really like your short. It does a nice job of presenting an overview to the play and is also fun and humorous. You have witty dialogue and thought bubbles, while infusing some of the original text.
ReplyDeleteThere are only a couple of things to do to improve your project:
1. I don't think that you need to replay the whole play with the text boxes. The story speaks for itself, so please don't repeat.
2. Take the time to add some more details that don't derail us from the story, but add to it.
3. Sources listed.
4. Grammatical errors fixed. Spelling errors noticed.
Once you do this, we will look at it again.