So funny and fun to watch. I think you covered most of the essential events in the play and you did a nice job of putting them into language that was both poetic and funny.
A couple things to improve on your project:
1. Music. I think this will really amp up your project and give it the bang that you want.
2. Spelling and punctuation. Go back and be critical with Capitol letters, commas, and such so that your animation flows without any problems.
3. Look at finer points. There are times when the dialogue is too long and I can't read because of time that it's on screen. Other times, the dialogue is a bit too long. I am not familiar with the software, but it seems like you can edit the time in which the viewer can read the dialogue.
This is enough to get your project to where you want it. Like I said, awesome so far.
Domo Animate: 
First reaction: Awesome.
ReplyDeleteSo funny and fun to watch. I think you covered most of the essential events in the play and you did a nice job of putting them into language that was both poetic and funny.
A couple things to improve on your project:
1. Music. I think this will really amp up your project and give it the bang that you want.
2. Spelling and punctuation. Go back and be critical with Capitol letters, commas, and such so that your animation flows without any problems.
3. Look at finer points. There are times when the dialogue is too long and I can't read because of time that it's on screen. Other times, the dialogue is a bit too long. I am not familiar with the software, but it seems like you can edit the time in which the viewer can read the dialogue.
This is enough to get your project to where you want it. Like I said, awesome so far.
KEEP GOING!!!
Cool. I think you fixed most of the grammatical errors. There are few more in there, but they are really minor, so find them and make it perfect.
ReplyDeleteCan you add music? Ask Sam, he was able to.
And the worked cited in the end of the video please.
Do this and you have a great Hamlet to share with the world!